jueves, 3 de junio de 2010

The gender not is a problem for be midwife.



For its true before of enter to career never I had thought about of gender issues in my career. I started have considered when be enter to study obstetrics and realize that the most of my classmate were womens; to more specific the 10% approximately were man. Never had I felt bad about this single think that this is a challenge and makes me laugh is surroended of womens. Someone peoples have me said that to they wanted are in my place, I think that this happens because they are men. From of my point of view this labor of midwives also would make men and they have made. Despite that in is labor in a start single were midwives, the society have changed, wh? because that so women went and can make work of men, also the men went and can make work of women. Existed women that in someone issues prefer be treated for men midwives, because its more attend, more sensible in comparison whit the midwives. I think that the gender not is a problem for be midwife.

8 comentarios:

  1. Hi Jorge,
    The participation in "women" career actual is in rise, because the gender problems gradually is decreasing.
    I agree with you, Men and Women can to do the same labor.

    See you in class

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  2. Very good...yes the gender isn't a problem because men and women have the same capacities and we will to do a good job!!!

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  3. About the previous comments...

    It's very interesting see men fight for gender diferences, because I think this isn't an usual situation. In general, women look for gender equality. However, in Midwifery is the exception!!!!

    See you next class.

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  4. I guess you feel very strange among a lot of women when you entered to obstetrics!
    Also i think that gender is not a problem for to do a good job

    See you!!

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  5. Hi George
    I have a suggestion in any word, that is a typos, wh?-> why?

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  6. Jorge!! hello! how are you?
    I hope that you are fine!
    I agree with your opinion and I think that you have reason.
    As suggestion, I say you that change "because that so women went and can make work of men, also the men went and can make work of women" for a phrase like "If there are women in men's work, may also have men in women's work"

    Well, Jorge, I hope my suggestions are useful!

    See you

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  7. Hi George!

    Maybe the title could be: "The gender is not a problem to study Midwifery".
    In my opinion this sentence: "For its true before of enter to career never I had thought about of gender issues in my career" is better if you write the next way: "I never thought found gender issues in my career".
    This sentence: "I started have considered when be enter to study obstetrics and realize that the most of my classmate were womens; to more specific the 10% approximately were man" could be write the next way: "When I started to study Midwifery, I saw that the mostly class were women and just the 10% were men".
    This sentence: "Never had I felt bad about this single think that this is a challenge and makes me laugh is surroended of womens" could be write the next way: "I never felt bad for stay in a "women´s career", because I take this like a challenge".
    This sentence: "Someone peoples have me said that to they wanted are in my place, I think that this happens because they are men" could be write the next way: "Some men say me that they want study my career because they could be close of women".
    This sentence: "From of my point of view this labor of midwives also would make men and they have made" could be write of the next way: In my view the men can be Midwives too".
    The sentence: "Despite that in is labor in a start single were midwives, the society have changed, wh? because that so women went and can make work of men, also the men went and can make work of women" could be write of the next way: "Despite that the Midwifery was a women career, it changed because in the society the women and men roles every day are most egalitarian".
    This sentence: "Existed women that in someone issues prefer be treated for men midwives, because its more attend, more sensible in comparison whit the midwives" could be write of the next way: "Some women expressed that she prefer to the men midwives, because they are more attentive and sensitive".
    Finally the sentence: " I think that the gender not is a problem for be midwife" could be write of the next way: "I think that the gender roles is not a problem for to be a Midwive".

    I hope help you with this suggestions!

    See you soon!

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